Comments on: 1.14

By: Mai

Mai — Mon, 06 Apr 2009 11:17:38 +0000

That second-last panel really made me laugh for some reason. The combination of her startled face, and the leaping salamander. xD And the second panel is just gorgeous. Wonderful art.

By: caili

caili — Thu, 02 Apr 2009 23:03:03 +0000

Your art is gorgeous, and regardless of plot speed, your comic’s designed to hook readers from the first page. I guess I’m a new fan.

By: Earthan

Earthan — Thu, 02 Apr 2009 05:25:11 +0000

I’m new, so I just read pages 1 through 14 all together. You have nothing to worry about with pacing, you obviously have a talent for it. Each page works perfectly on its own, but all together the pacing’s still intact. I noticed you worrying about it in some of your comments, so I wanted to tell you that it’s actually coming out really finely crafted. You probably have an intuitive grasp of storytelling, which means A) You can’t necessarily tell how good you are at it, and B) You’re really good at it.

By: alexds1

alexds1 — Wed, 01 Apr 2009 17:02:20 +0000

@new guy, no its not a sequel, though it starts out in the middle of current events in the world So it may be a bit jarring and confusing at first but it’ll clear up soon! If you want more info you can always check out the wiki linked in the “about” section!

By: new guy

new guy — Wed, 01 Apr 2009 08:34:48 +0000

I’m sorry, I’m new to this story, is this a sequal to something or do I just need to wait a few more pages to catch on. ‘Cause I’m actually a little slow on the uptake sometimes. : P

By: Rhan

Rhan — Tue, 31 Mar 2009 11:24:34 +0000

I’m glad to see I wasn’t the only person to survive Genetics by doodling in the margins.

By: Critter

Critter — Mon, 30 Mar 2009 16:01:09 +0000

Oooh, I’m so excited about more updates :3 I love this comic so much

By: CptnSuz

CptnSuz — Mon, 30 Mar 2009 13:35:39 +0000

Her expression in the second panel is SO lifelike. I expected tears to start pouring. Bravo.

By: Loppi

Loppi — Sun, 29 Mar 2009 21:33:00 +0000

I love this page, especially the close up. You can really see the distress and tension in her face. Man I hate web comics, I AM TO IMPATIENT AND EASILY EXCITABLE FOR THIS .

By: PunkAvatard

PunkAvatard — Sun, 29 Mar 2009 20:39:42 +0000

I know, it’s probably been said a million times, but, I can’t stop looking at the second pannel, It’s just so beautiful…Continue the great work AlexDS, and (as always) I can’t wait for the next page!