Comments on: 1.18

By: BrainBlow

BrainBlow — Thu, 29 Jul 2010 15:09:05 +0000

“’cause I am”
Best answer ever :3

By: Alan

Alan — Mon, 18 May 2009 02:27:22 +0000

Much better with the motion on, shows exactly what’s happening. and not with rubbishy motion lines either. You got a good solution there methinks.

By: Emonkster

Emonkster — Wed, 29 Apr 2009 01:01:20 +0000

I love your art. Im gonna keep reading a check back for more!

By: ArmadaRyu

ArmadaRyu — Mon, 20 Apr 2009 02:41:00 +0000

I’m going to have to be a jerk and second (third?) the motion lines thing for the stick. I thought he was being poked between the eyes before I read the comments. Smacked in the face with the stick is way more funny! I know you hate the lines but, like rufftoon said, blurr? Sound fx? (I’ve noticed you don’t seem to like sounds fx either, at least, I don’t see you use them very often) Not even a *smek* maybe? If it only could all be animated, where written sound effects and motion lines do not exist. Until then, I’m a slow reader who needs action direction D:
Other than that, I’m getting more and more impressed with each page on how many poses you can put Angora in without “revealing anything” and they don’t look forced at all. She is casually modest so to speak.

By: Otaku-sama

Otaku-sama — Sun, 19 Apr 2009 22:55:58 +0000

I definitely love your work! I found this comic very interesting, it reminds me the French comic Pyrénée. The thing I admire the most is the non-sexualized depiction of nudity and its inhibited realism. Frankly I’m sick of the sexualized-nakedness which ruins the a lot of good stories around there if you know what I mean.

by the way, it’d have been funnier if she’d have answered the “why are you naked?” question like this: “Because I’m not wearing clothes!” XD

By: Kass

Kass — Sun, 19 Apr 2009 21:41:40 +0000

DO IT. No wonder the diplomat is so freaked out. XDD

somehow it seems in character for Luca. *lol I dunno*

By: Dean

Dean — Sun, 19 Apr 2009 15:51:40 +0000

Oh Pinter, you make me such a chubbychaser. >__>

Apparently you make Der one, too.

By: james

james — Sat, 18 Apr 2009 19:44:52 +0000

You can’t … or you *won’t*?

By: rufftoon

rufftoon — Sat, 18 Apr 2009 06:15:58 +0000

I’m going to vote for the addition of at least a bit of blurr on the top line of that stick to indicate motion if you don’t want to add any motion lines. Sound fx would possibly also help there too, mostly because the visual look of the hit is not very exagerated (say if his head was being ripped off his body by the blow, you may not need a sound fx).
No one mentioned the word balloons in the last panel. A first quick read actually got me confused for a second because the balloon tail disappears completely behind Angora’s dialogue. You may wish to play around with that to make it clearer at a quick glance who’s talking.

Here I am nitpicking your stuff. I’m sorry! I’ll vote a couple of time for it to be forgiven.

By: Brinson

Brinson — Sat, 18 Apr 2009 03:20:32 +0000

God, I love Pinter’s paunch. So freakin’ cute!

Angora’s expressions always make me giggle.