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By: The Webcomic Overlook #99: The Meek « The Webcomic Overlook

The Webcomic Overlook #99: The Meek « The Webcomic Overlook — Fri, 06 Nov 2009 00:08:54 +0000

[...] tone significantly with Chapter 2, which opens with a bickering husband and wife. The man is Emperor Luca Sadar Duvida Gulo. Given his stature and his aristocratic attitude, I have to conclude that he isn’t “the [...]

By: Kili

Kili — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 14:56:55 +0000

Oh! I didn’t know this was his son! Did I miss a hint somewhere, or was I supposed to figure this out from the dialog and the resemblance?

I love this comic, and it’s a labor of love, but the only way I can read it is to go back to the first strip and read it from the beginning…

By: Allie

Allie — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 06:19:02 +0000

Hello! I saw your stuff at APE and bought a copy of chapter one. I love it! the colouring is beautiful and the characters are so full of life! Anyway, you can count on me following this from now on. Great work! Keep it up!

By: RJF

RJF — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 02:23:49 +0000

Well, it’s good to see that a father who’s a wee bit crabby in the mornings hasn’t dampened his son’s spirit.

By: annoyedwabbit

annoyedwabbit — Sat, 24 Oct 2009 01:58:46 +0000

One of the recent comments prompted me to post…

I really like the dialogue this chapter! It conveys a completely different atmosphere than the previous chapter, which is what I think it’s supposed to do. I respect people who can create different “vioces” for characters without making them be stereotypical or forced. I think little differences in characters’ speech patterns can say a lot about them.

By: Del

Del — Fri, 23 Oct 2009 19:25:47 +0000

I love this comic. It’s actually fantastic. Though you need to update faster xD You don’t know how eager I am to read more about this. Keep it going!

By: Simone

Simone — Fri, 23 Oct 2009 13:26:43 +0000

lol, I love Suda. So adorable XDD His grin in the third panel is just priceless
I love this comic. Fantastic work

By: alexds1

alexds1 — Thu, 22 Oct 2009 13:43:55 +0000

Thanks for stopping by, Kashkin! Glad you enjoyed reading the first chapter. I can’t agree with how you feel about the dialogue in this chapter, but then again I have the benefit of knowing a lot more backstory than you do I hope as the story continues, the intentionally stiffer elements of this chapter will start feeling a bit more ‘natural’ to you.

By: Kashkin

Kashkin — Thu, 22 Oct 2009 12:46:26 +0000

I discovered this today, courtesy of Mr. Codak. I love your art, and the story of the first chapter.

But, the old-fashioned affectations of these new characters is pretty… forced. This isn’t your dialogue at its best. Read some classics, that would probably help. Or some minor editing would go a long way.

Anyway, I love this comic. I’ll keep reading no matter what you do.

By: Nora

Nora — Thu, 22 Oct 2009 02:56:29 +0000

Charlie says it looks like his son gave him a wedgie =3=…
I’m engaged to an idiot…