Comments on: 2.15

By: Kosin

Kosin — Mon, 14 Dec 2009 13:14:56 +0000

I got the dad look , I just thought at first she was another son. It’s only because the comic is so good that things that are confusing stand out as much as they do. I think you’re doing an admirable job trying to weave all this information together.

By: BentKatana

BentKatana — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 23:39:24 +0000

…Judging by the current vote incentive, either the palace is being invaded by war bears, or Luca and Phe are into some really kinky sex…

By: skytide

skytide — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 21:40:06 +0000

I just wanted to add my two cents and say that personally, I don’t think Rana looks that masculine as some have commented. She obviously takes more after her father, and while the resemblance to Luca is there she still is clearly, to me, a girl. She does come off as a little more sturdily built with rounder features, but those aren’t necessarily just male attributes and I like that you’re incorporating that into your artwork. (Also hi, I like your comic.)

By: sweet_gardenia

sweet_gardenia — Sun, 13 Dec 2009 05:49:02 +0000

THANK YA THANK YA I’LL BE HERE ALL NIGHT FOLKS *bows*

I couldn’t resist…I have no sole -_-

By: sweet_gardenia

sweet_gardenia — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 20:54:38 +0000

Sudacris incidentally sounds like the most awesome rapstar name ever

By: alexds1

alexds1 — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 18:30:07 +0000

Hahaha XD I did not know that about the word “suda,” haha. His full name is Sudacris, though, not quite as sweaty. Actually all the kids are sort of named after amphibians, in some way

By: alexds1

alexds1 — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 18:26:41 +0000

She is supposed to look like her dad, that is the main thing I’m trying to get across… then again, I don’t always draw the most differentiated faces in the world either XD I’ll probably go back and edit her face at some point, just because a few people have mentioned the same issue and I don’t want her looking that extremely manly, haha.

By: ampquot

ampquot — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 11:30:40 +0000

Hi, nice comic!

You probably already know that, but ‘rana’ means ‘frog’ in italian language, ’suda’ means ‘he sweats’… while ‘luca’ is an actual male name, which leds me unconsciously to consider the other names as they were italian words. Which makes me giggle a little
‘Good evening, princess FROG!’

By: ColdCedric

ColdCedric — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 05:35:14 +0000

Ok just checking

By: Kosin

Kosin — Sat, 12 Dec 2009 00:21:03 +0000

I like the body images backstory; I hope this will be discernible from upcoming pages too. (I personally love sidenotes but not everyone reads them.)
As for the hair, though, a cartoony style like yours relies more heavily on visual shorthand than a more detailed style would, and peaked hairline is shorthand for “man”; I am a new reader (that is, I never saw the sketch-comic so I’m learning about the characters as new pages are added here) and when Rana first showed up I had to do a double-take. There is little about her face that identifies her as female, so seeing how much care goes into these drawings, I presume that this is the effect you were after.