2.27

2.27

March 6th, 2010

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The late post! As late as this is, I hope you’ll appreciate that I haven’t messed up my post a week average since I’ve started the comic, and I am not going to break that streak now. Page 28 will be up tomorrow so check back then!

The vote incentive (which will be up until tomorrow) is something relatively special, the image from the 1st wallpaper challenge which I haven’t posted publicly. The wallpaper itself is not available at the moment but at least you can see what it was :B

See you tomorrow!

ps the unwritten sfx for the second panel is “snarf”

83 comments to “2.27”
  1. O! says:

    I forgive you!

    I love how you establish scene shifts through color!

  2. angela c says:

    Whee new page, and another new one tomorrow… So exciting :D Thanks~~~~~~ :D

  3. Colt-Khaboom says:

    Oo I wonder if they know that won’t be the only ones who can speak Carissi at the dinner table. That could cause some interestingness. I wonder if Phe can?
    Also, you’re right. No need to ask for forgiveness. I’m happy to get my Meek when I can, and getting it a week late is better than not having it! It just makes it that much sweeter when it does come.

  4. rainey says:

    Yay, an update! :D

    Question: What’s the long-haired ambassador (can’t remember her name) speaking at first if she’s not speaking her native language? Plain English?

    • alexds1 says:

      The common language is the Santri language, which is analogous to plain English :)

    • Yes that’s why the other ambassador tells her to keep her voice down and speak Carissi. Well technically they’re not speaking “English” per say. They’re probably speaking the dominate language of the country there in which I believe is Santri.

  5. Perhaps Phe is wrong and the her husband isn’t as crazy (though he is obsessed) as she thinks. Can’t wait for the next page.

  6. Namsab says:

    I think Phe can either speak Carissi or she was there early enough to catch the “blood-drinking, cannibal lunatics” line… either way, sh*t is going down at dinner, and it might not even be Luca’s fault! XD

  7. OH! I forgot to ask are both the ambassadors female? I remember Luca mentioning the Queen sending only female ambassadors but the skinny one looks a bit neutral.

  8. Gleebits says:

    That’s what war begets; prejudice and ridiculous views about foreigners. Cannibals indeed

  9. Maphysto says:

    I see the Carissi still have some racism to work through.

  10. marinated_fish says:

    Not “far too kind”, but making up for her husband’s rude reception.

    Wow, just how large is that room they’re in? It sure looks huge, judging from the silhouettes in the window. Watching the lady eating makes her also very less ladylike than she looks at first… D:
    Still, she complains about Pasori eating manners. Oh, the irony!!

  11. Elora says:

    Wow. Very cool page, though. Can’t wait to see what’s gonna happen at the dinner table.

  12. Ashwara says:

    Hm, I’ve got a foreboding feeling!

  13. LP says:

    Love her expression in the second panel – PIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIISSED! LOL

  14. Reed says:

    Great drawing style and and expressions – the third panel ist my favorite! :-)
    Also, interesting story. Especially the current chapter has really captivated me.

  15. Fleece says:

    Those ambassadors are really amusing, good that the scene change brought us back to them. :D
    Second panel wins!

  16. Hel says:

    Phe’s face in the last panel looks kind of dangerous, as in ‘I might be gentle, but I am still wife to DeSadar’, almost like she had heard what the ambassadors were talking about =P
    P.S: yay for sfx.

  17. Wandered In says:

    You know, I felt very sorry for both ambassadors (ambassadrixes? Far cooler word, will use) before. Now I just feel sorry for the tall, not-noble ambassadrix. She seems like an intelligent, stateswomanly person forced to deal with a less subtle political force who unfortunately is her boss.
    Dinner will be interesting.

    • alexds1 says:

      The chubbier one is one of the Queen’s cousins too :\ Nothing like having to suck up to people who only got a job because they were related to the boss!

    • Reed says:

      I agree, though it remains to be seen whether Lethy really is the more likable of the two. I withhold my judgement of them for now. I get the feeling there won’t be a ‘good’ side in this chapter anyhow.

      • Wandered In says:

        I didn’t mean to say that Lethy is nicer or more likable, just more capable, and (perhaps Vetinari, the ever-amazing tyrant from the Discworld series has influenced this) in a situation like this, nice is not necessarily a good thing.
        Having to put up with someone possibly ruining international relations because they’re the Queen’s cousin has to be grating.

        • Reed says:

          Again I agree and I’m willing to give her my sympathy for that. She is definitely the true diplomat of the two.
          Incidentally, I’m a huge fan of Vetinari’s myself. He’s the best. =)

  18. minetruly says:

    HOLYSHITANUPDATE

    YAYYYY!!!!!!

    As always, amazing rendering of hair and faces.

    I WILL BE BACK TOMORROW! YAY!

  19. Donna says:

    I knoticed something odd about the hand position with the woman eating chocolate in the second and third panle.

    The way the fingers are shown makes it appear as though the woman is eating with her right hand in the picture where you can see her face. The index and ring finger up, the other two curled down and away going left to right. But in the Next panle we can see her thumb and pointer finger clutching the sweet, from an angle that makes it look like she is using her left hand, but the arm is positioned for it to still be the right…

    Does anybody else see what I’m seeing?

    • alexds1 says:

      Haha, she’s actually eating with both hands… its kind of gross XD You can tell since in the second panel it is a new candy, not a 1/2 bitten one as the first panel suggests. Probably storing up delicious calories before being subjected to a Pasori-style dinner!

      • NeverfilledVoid says:

        Though, the fingers in the second panel looks abit akward since the indexfinger seems longer than the middle finger. But I don’t think it is important enough to change it, unless you want to. ^^

  20. ammeyellah says:

    Howwww is it even possible for you to do two updates in a week? Unreal.
    I kind of hate that ambassador with a burning passion now.

  21. Urza says:

    And any sympathy I might have had for them is tossed out the window.

  22. Ozymandias says:

    Sorry if you’ve mentioned this before but how is Phe’s name pronounced?

  23. RJF says:

    I take it that that lone ellipsis in the middle panel is meant to represent Phe having her ear to the door and waiting a moment before knocking.

    And by such simple things do the grandest plots come undone. You can toss the room for bugs (figuratively speaking, I’m not sure of the technology level here) and shove paper in all of the cut-out eyes in the portraits… but the one obvious way of having an eavesdropper flies over everyone’s heads.

  24. EnviousMango says:

    I really like how the long-haired ambassidor is a nervous eater and the fact her nail polish matches her eyes.
    Also, the way Lethy is less diplomatic in private and how she puts on the mask when Phe arrives is interesting. Lethy in general is cool. Basically, this page is awesome.

  25. Cedarwolf22 says:

    Is that a Peace Plant? Ho-ho, I see whut u did thar!

    Definitely getting that feeling of artificial night-lighting. It’s there just to keep you awake, I swear.

    Schedule slip my buttocks. WE READ BECAUSE WE CARE.

  26. Sarah says:

    I don’t think you need to ask forgiveness. Fot one you provide an awesome, aesthetically pleasing comic for free and, I don’t know a bout any one else but, I’m not always on the internet. Sometimes I won’t go on for a month or more. So I don’t check up on comics that update a bajillion times a week.

  27. Cheri says:

    True story,
    I was looking this up on my phone as I was eating hush puppies at Long John Silvers.
    Second panel is hilarious because of which. =]

  28. Ryl says:

    You have to remember that most of the time this is how ambassadors are. More often than not they receive schooling in high and low points of the other culture in order to avoid international disasters; they aren’t required to adore the people with which they’re seeking an agreement, but rather offer an optimistic (or at the least neutral) semblance. Ambassadors are to be level-headed in meetings but can speak how they please in private, and given the treatment the ladies just received it’s understandable that they’re vexed even if only one openly displays aggravation.

    Also “We can work with the wife” doesn’t necessarily imply something devious or sinister. Ambassadors have a goal to accomplish (doing whatever is necessary within parameters given by their ruler) and in this case it’s (allegedly) peace. Without knowing what their instructions were, we get to just sit back and wait and see how it all unfolds.

    On a side note, I love Phe’s over-the-shoulder expression in that last panel. :D

  29. Tito says:

    Phe is turning out to be an extremely well thought out character. One of the most intelligent comics out there, this…great work!

  30. coNs says:

    I’m thinking Phe can be even more dangerous than Luca? ._.

  31. coNs says:

    Erm, what is that green semi-transparent chopped circle in her hand on the second panel, btw?

  32. Nadiasama says:

    The ambassador stuffing her face just screams “I put make-up on with a spatula” in the second panel from the way you defined her eyelashes where every other woman featured didn’t have established eyelashes as she does. And here I thought she was the meek one. Pfft, she’s proof that high society tend to beget low class people. Self-righteousness ftw! /sarcasm :P

    • alexds1 says:

      oh god XD I can see her slapping at her face with a mascara spatula now. Well its not her fault that her family is well off! right! right…?

  33. Maphysto says:

    Is ‘if you love the king/queen’ idiomatic? If it is, it sounds like Caris has something of a theocracy going on.

    • alexds1 says:

      Well.. yeah its kind of complicated. For now lets just say that Luca is considered the Emperor and is referred to as such, whereas Caris currently has a Queen who is referred to as such. I’ll get into the King later.

  34. Bodine says:

    What is that tiny, transparent, green blot at the bottom of the second panel? A reflection or something?

  35. Tobu says:

    Interesting adjustments to the characters of the ambassadors. I remember our lady of the nervous binge diet being much more appealing and friendly in the thumbnail draft. Now I can’t help but wonder what effect this’ll have on the events of the rest of the chapter.

    Nice switch from reds to blues, by the way. Very stylish scene (and mood) change.

  36. Blargle says:

    I honestly can’t get a fix on whether you’re a guy or a gal. I’ve been reading this comic since page one and I gotta admit I’m kinda curious.

  37. Tbwulf says:

    In the third panel is the ambassador’s cheeks puffed out from chewing, or from exasperation? Cause that speck of food flying from her mouth makes me think the first while her eyes make me think the later.

  38. pasha says:

    Phe is fantastic.

  39. Silver Lady says:

    “We can work with the wife”, huh? That sounds quite suspicious.

  40. Libby Rust says:

    Great…between messed up reproductive hormones (HOORAY FOR PPMD AND HAVING ONLY ONE OVARY! XD) and messed up thyroid hormones, I was already hell bent on raiding the local drug store chain for much needed candy crack. They normally have awesome foreign chocolate around this time of year. Aaaand then, of course, you have to go and draw the fat chick scarfing down what looks to be Lindt truffles…DAMN YOU. LOL

    Seriously, though, I love the airy, regal light blues and golds and greys on the Carissi nobility and the greens and browns and earth tones on the Santri/Pasori people. I love how the colors and architectural themes match their respective cultures so well.

    I also love the role reversals and how all the little details and such of both sets of peoples both mix and contrast their respective roles. I’m sensing a lot of WWII themes going on, and I love how the “commoner” Pasori are now in charge instead of the “royal” Carissi people.

    Overall you’ve done a fine job of making a wonderfully complex world with all these subtle little nuances. It’s really easy to get sucked into this reality you’ve created, and honestly,I enjoy every trip.

    I’d also like to add that despite having a general idea of where this story is going, you always seem to pleasantly surprise me with each new page. Normally, I can see where an author/artist is going with something a mile away. Kudos to you for giving me that treat with each update. It’s not an easy feat, lemme tell ya. :)

    • Libby Rust says:

      And, er, that might be PMDD, not PPMD. It’s way the hell too early (or rather, late) for my brain to be working all that properly. X_x

  41. Farorna says:

    I really adore Tesa’s “snarf” expression in the second panel. The way her eyes are kind of out of focus and everything is pretty awesome.

    Also, I agree: the way you use colors to differentiate scene changes is superb.

  42. AK says:

    Love the comic, I’m a long time follower! thought I’s finally post.
    I wonder if Phe heard those comments from the ambassadors… In that case “you are so kind” “not at all” would so be foreboding :/

    I’m also wondering how you pronounce Phe’s name… Is it like feh, fee or fay?

    There’s a bit of stray green at the bottom of the second panel, is that a mistake or am I missing something?

  43. Karrey says:

    Love the scene-change. :) And lovely colors as usual. Random: I am really fond of those paintings in the background too! Is that small painting resembling a frog or reptile of some sort? Cool, nonetheless!

  44. Marion says:

    Heh. I’m sure the Pasori *are* barbarians (their menfolk are mysogenous, succesful males are allowed to marry multiple wives and they marry off their daughters at age fourteen – I’m sure that sounds pretty barbarous to the more female-orientated Carissi. It does to me), and they probably *have* a national dish like blood-soup or something (the Spartans did) or blood-pudding (like the popular British Black Pudding, or the Dutch Bloedworst = ‘blood sausage’), but the point is, dear inbred cousin of the Carissi Queen, that you may not enslave and kill millions of barbarians simply because they are barbarians.

  45. Madmab says:

    ROFL at the second panel. Oh so feminine.

  46. Funky Al says:

    What exactly is ambassador jerkface eating in panel 2? It looks like some kind of delicious pastry. I want one.

  47. DarkStorm says:

    I find it interesting how we the readers have gone from being upset with Luca’s supposedly unreasonable anger towards Caris to being upset with the Carissi ambassadors’ behavior. Proof nothing is ever black and white. I suspect Phe may know Carissi – for someone who stood up for them against her husband hours earlier, she’s got a look on her face that says she’s not too thrill with them. Usually the response of “Not at all” to “You are too kind” is meant as a polite demurral for the sake of etiquette, but I think she is being quite honest at the moment…

  48. makani says:

    bahah i love her nervously/annoyedly eating face

  49. bah! As long as the pages are good quality, and I get to see this story follow through to the end, I dont mind if it misses an update. You are human, after all (or at least I think you are!) Just dont stop altogether, the story is so interesting!

  50. Anni says:

    Uhm,I was just wondering,if Santri is analogous to plain english and Pasori is similar to latvian,then what language is Carissi based on?Estonian maybe?Sorry if this is so out of the blue!
    Mostly basing this assumption on the fact that Estonia and Latvia are placed so close together,and yet a lot estonians and latvians seem to resent the other a lot,sort of like the ambassadors from Carissi don’t seem like Pasori people much at all.

    • alexds1 says:

      Actually Pasori is not like Latvian, it was a joke I’d made on another site. If you want to get technical, I took a lot of the sounds for Pasori from Russian and Armenian, since I like the way those languages sound. The Carissi language is based on another language you might know of but I have to keep that secret for now :)

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